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Silly Seasons

Poem By: Wandiola
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Submitted: Apr 30, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 13    Likes: 4   


Winter,cold.

Skin becomes hard and dry.

One deserves a hot apple pie.

What happened to the blue sky?

I miss the warm sun embracing my back like a loving mother.

But instead, the piercing winds decide to smother.

OH woe, when is summer?

Spring, cool

Girls and boys drop down their jackets

 They might even grab some tennis racquets.

What happened to my flower packet?

Greenery blooms, like new born babies

Valenties day! I wonder...maybe...

Alas Winter gone, spring saved me!

Summer hot,

Beaches filled with sandy humans,

A lad in the far corner, role plays a crewman

What happened to Robby newman?

Humidty high, sweat clings,

I wonder what else I could bring?

To summer, the season. Ive been waiting to sing!

Autmn brown,

Stacks of leaves, cover the ground

creating mounds and mounds and mounds

This Season, feels so confound

The calm breeze lifts my mood

I guess its time for me to conclude

That season's are definately the time for me you..


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Poem has inspiration

Posted: May 1, 2008

Author Comment:

well thanks!!!

its very descriptive... :)

and hey... were the paragraphs really like that?

just curious... ^_^ have a nice day

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

don't worry its not my best work!!!

great poem. looking forward to reading more.
snow

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

IT's very descriptive. Lovely.
~Kaori

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks, this was just silly though!

Great poem. Four seasons are fun!

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! its just silly!

I liked it! For some reason I always like poetry about the seasons. Really. Nice job! Hope everything is going good for you.

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

I AM SOOOOOOOOO STRESSED RIGHT NOW!

nice i again i say i love nature poems!

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

aaaah i should write more nature poems!

Great poem i liked it a lot.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks! a bit silly though

I like diz poem...Another season dat should go into the book. I give it a 9 out of 10.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you!!

so sweet....I love all seasons except scorching sun....

And I love you for this poem....

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you!

Oh I love this. I think I prefer Sping where 'Greenery blooms, like new born babies'. Great use of similie. I wrote a poem about seasons about 6 years ago full of personifications, pretty simiar to this.

Keep up the great work.

Olola.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!!! maybe you should publish it in Booksie!!!

I Just love the seasons. ^_^ Summer is my Fave so far. Cute Poem and Keep writing.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

I think it was cute. Luved the topic

Posted: Oct 19, 2008

Author Comment:

ha ha ha thanks!



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