THANK YOU (For Runereader)
I am at loss of words, so this is not going to be very good. But I also feel like this friend has done so much and the least I could do is write him something. This is not perfect, Billy, but will work on it someday and make it better.
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Submitted: Aug 19, 2008
Reads: 44
Comments: 5
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WHAT'S IN A FRIEND?
A man is no Island, forever I have been told,
To met and mix will forever take toll,
Yet locked up in a closet, I always feel safe
But then a closet is not an island...
is it?
So sometimes I feign being bold and brave
Creeping out to the state of the outside world
But my worries and fears tacked safely on the shelf,
In the closet.
No need to burden with my own baggage,
I seek out seeking a mate.
We laugh together as we walk to work,
Pat each other in congratulation when success knocks
Yet the knife at the back inches in with no trembling
Getting to the top is all that matters
And friends can sometimes be the ladder.
A phone call at midnight have them running
A friend in dilemma they cannot stand
A shoulder to cry on or just a plain old hug
And maybe sometimes a gentle tug
For that's what comes with being a friend.
Friends are there for many to have
Yet the definition for friends will forever stay broad
But we all know, when we look deep inside
Just the kind of friends that we are to others
And the kind of friends that we keep with us
Yet my main goal for this,
Is to say...
Am glad you are my friend.
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Poem comes across with a bite.
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
runreader
(not registered user)
TIS THE HAND OF DESTINY
THATS PATHES YOUR WAY NOT I..
I CANNOT MATCH THAT DESTINY,
NO MATTER HOW I TRY..
FOR DESTINY IS WITH YOU
UNTILL THE BITTER END..
BUT FOR THE PRESENT MOMENT
Im GLAD TO CALL YOU FRIEND
loves babes
George,Maha and FLO
This lady IS a friend of the world!
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
This is a nice thought Deb
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
And i am glad u r mine....this is awesome Deb...really really good....
it brought out ur inner turmoil clearly and honestly and that is what makes ur poems so special...
u know what - i got FLU too since last 3 days...and my body is not used to it and hence i am bed ridden...just a debilitating one....
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
hi! deb. u've proved ur heartfelt feelings of friendship with this poem. no amount of imperfections can rise to the feelings u hold. billy is a lucky man to've u as a friend. and uu acknowledgement finally, "am glad you are my friend" is touching. keep it up, my dear friend. lol. ;-)
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
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