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Submitted: Aug 9, 2008 Reads: 42 Comments: 2 Likes: 0
The pain
Of the
poison
Passing through
you
destroying everything
in it's path
The sorrow
of knowing
all future chance of
Happiness
is gone
The shame
of surrendering
to that which
aspires to
cause you agony
The after thought
that flickers meaninglessly
through your mind
Is it worth it?
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Ooh, I like it.
It's very descriptive and you use a lot of imagery in your writing. I really like this.
Keep up the good work :)
Posted: Aug 14, 2008
Nice descriptions...I really enjoyed this poem. :)
It was like a story...A really sad one that unfolded perfectly. I must agree with J.G The imagery rocked.
Posted: Aug 19, 2008
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