:) IM NOT EMO
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Submitted: Feb 4, 2008
Reads: 45
Comments: 4
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Until Tomorrow
Candles flicker in the dark
You slice your wrists they leave there marks
Alone you sit and ponder why
You hurt yourself over some dumb guy
Do you like the taste of salty tears
Do you think no one has ears
Because they don’t listen to your shouts
And sometimes do you have your doubts
Of why you are still alive today
You ponder all your time away
You smile and ignore the pain
But then you go stand out in the rain
And cry out all you hurt and sorrow
And live it out until tomorrow.
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Comments:
Another sad one. You have so much emotion behind the words. Keep writing. I think you're doing a wonderful job!
Posted: Feb 5, 2008
Dats good and sad. Did you feel like dis when you broke up with someone.. If not,your making a piint about hurting yourself over some break-up. If so, sorry.
Posted: May 7, 2008
Sad... is this how people hurt when they'd just broke up? I'm kinda curious cause i don't have any experiences on break-ups(meaning: no-bf at all). Pardon my rudeness, I'm always like this. Great poem!
Posted: May 18, 2008
oh this is so sad! the emotion moved me like BAM! then i could'nt let go of the poem untill the end of it! gr8 job!
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
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