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Untill tommarow

Poem By: youngriter
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Submitted: Feb 4, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


Until Tomorrow

 

Candles flicker in the dark

You slice your wrists they leave there marks
Alone you sit and ponder why

You hurt yourself over some dumb guy

Do you like the taste of salty tears

Do you think no one has ears

Because they don’t listen to your shouts

And sometimes do you have your doubts

Of why you are still alive today

You ponder all your time away

You smile and ignore the pain

But then you go stand out in the rain

And cry out all you hurt and sorrow

And live it out until tomorrow.


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Comments:

Another sad one. You have so much emotion behind the words. Keep writing. I think you're doing a wonderful job!

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thnnx

Dats good and sad. Did you feel like dis when you broke up with someone.. If not,your making a piint about hurting yourself over some break-up. If so, sorry.

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

AHHA like i said before im soo like the least emoish person ever but still i like 2 rite sad things idk y? but thnx 4 ur concern

Sad... is this how people hurt when they'd just broke up? I'm kinda curious cause i don't have any experiences on break-ups(meaning: no-bf at all). Pardon my rudeness, I'm always like this. Great poem!

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

aww thnx yea i hate getting broken up with but i mean life goes on so hey when your sad write a poem

oh this is so sad! the emotion moved me like BAM! then i could'nt let go of the poem untill the end of it! gr8 job!

Posted: Aug 16, 2008



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