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this is a poem i wrote a really long time ago for school. I don't particularly know why I wrote this poem ....i don't LOVE grief or anything....:) haha and I am not a sad person soo.....????? View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 19, 2008 Reads: 29 Comments: 5 Likes: 3
Pain, sorrow, unsatisfaction
the sweet life of misery
many people endure this life
while others watch in harmony
grief can sometimes be healthy
for those who seek perfection
but is can also be a dangerous matter
when fallen into the wrong hands
so live your life at your fullest extent
and don't be afraid of grief
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It has a good message - grief is a part of life. I in fact always did fear it, feared somone close to me dying. When the first person really close to me died, my brother, it hit me like a tsunami. The power of my emotions engulfed me. Nothing could have prepared me. Nice little poem - stay happy!
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
the one who is never satisfied
keeps growing and changing
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
grief can sometimes be healthy
for those who seek perfection
so live your life at your fullest extent
and don't be afraid of grief
i love how u create magic with so few words...And that's why i am always here on ur posts...
Posted: Aug 8, 2008
On the brighter side, grief could be a good source of strength and understanding to get to know more about life. ^^
Posted: Aug 18, 2008
And i love to come back again and again...to talk to you, to read ur poems and GET LOST in the depth of ur poems...
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
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