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What You Did Kills Me

Script By: Blisteredsouls
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About this guy and he finds his girl friend cheating And this has nothing to do with me just something i came up with View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 24, 2008    Reads: 87    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Girl is on the couch making out with a hot guy, her cellphone rings...

Girl:
Hey babe, I'll be right back. I need to take this call.

Boy:
Yeah okay. Sure.

She walks into the next room.

Girl:
Hey! Whats up?

Guy [on her cellphone]:
Nothing, hey hun, do you think we could go do something later tonight? What are the chances my boss let me get out early.

Girl:
Yeah, sounds great!

Guy [on her cellphone]:
Okay. I'm right by your house, I'll come to get you now.

Girl:
That's not such a good idea...

Guy [on her cellphone]:
Why not?

Girl:
I'm busy right now... sorry.

Guy [on her cellphone]:
With what? It's our anniversary! You didn't make any other plans did you...?

In her head she yells, CRAP! Throws clothes back on quickly.

Girl:
No No... I was just eating... with the family.

Guy [on her cellphone]:
But I thought you said your family was away this weekend, up at your resort?

The guy walks into her house, turns the corner into the hallway.
goes downstairs, and finds his best friend on her couch, half un-dressed, trying to pull his pants back on and his girlfriend pulling her shirt over her head.

Guy:
What the heck is going on?!

Girl:
I can explain! Please listen to me!

Guy:
Benny? How could you do this to me! Rachel!
I thought you loved me! And yet, your sleeping with MY BEST FRIEND!!!!

Girl:
John...!

John with tears in his eyes, he rushes out of room, and slams the door.

Benny climbs out of the window, starts his car, and drives off down the street.

Girl runs after her boyfriend. Yelling....

Girl:
NOOOO! Please!! Come back John!! Pleeeeeasssse????!!

She falls down and cries.

John turns around, looks straight at his girlfriend in tears.

John:
Why? Rachel, why? I loved you! Oh my God, I'm in love with a whore.
Does this mean I have to pay you now?!
Here take this as the cash. He drops a ring box on her lap.

She opens the ring box. Her jaw drops...
Before her eyes is a diamond wedding ring.

Girl:
You were going to propose?

Guy:
Yeah... how dumb was I?

And as he slowly walked back to his car, his headlights faded
... And she was in despair.


Later that night, the girl got a phone call from the police saying he had died of an overdose of drugs and when they found him he had a picture of him and her in his hands


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Comments:

that would suck so much!.. the last part would just make the girl h8 herself for life, then she would kill her self, then the other guy would..... yeah... sorry im just a little hyped up... to much ice cream!......

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Its ok
and thank for the comment

Oh god. I'm crying. I actually am. And I hardly ever cry reading stuff. I only cried when I read that one story. And he was going to propose to her?! Woah. I totally love it.

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.c and thanks for acutally reading my work



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