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Ordinary Life With Chris Brown

Script By: Sameera2711
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What if Chris Brown had a lil'sister named Chanelle and she's...well you'll read.
My first challenge!!! For jfm98.
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Heartsick
Love (ly)
Happy
Mist
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open
Googles
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Submitted: Jul 26, 2008    Reads: 67    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Narrator: Chris Brown and his lil' sister, Chanelle, were watching t.v at a hotel.


T.V: Gatson...You shouldn't have have made that bet with Lucky.

But Mandy, I had to, it was either that or...

*slap* You make my heartsick. *She was about to slap him,again. But he grabbed her hand and pulled her in for a kiss.*

Chanelle: No Mandy!!! Don't fall for Gatson's Love.


Chris: So Dramatic.


Chanelle: Shut – up!!


Chris: You hang out with Auntie Patrisha to much. *Hands her two Tissues.*


Chanelle: *Whipping the tears I know.*


Chris: *Sneakily took the remote* Next!!


Chanelle: Nnnooo!!! How will I know if if Gatson loses the bet..., or if Lucky dies..., And if Mandy Snaps!?!?


Chris: *Yawns* Gatson did lose, so Mandy stabbed Lucky for no reason except anger. And the sheriff was there and shot Mandy in the right shoulder.


Chanelle: *Stares at him weird*


Chris: What?!?!


Chanelle: How did you know that?


Chris: Auntie P. was talking about it on the phone.


Chanelle: *Punches him* Thanks for telling me the ending!!


Chris: Actually...Mandy was in jail-


Chanelle: *Grabs a pillow and attack his head* Shut-up!!!


Chris: *Fights back.*

Narrator: It was only secounds until she took the pillow away from his head.


Chris: *Breathing fast*


Chanelle: *Giving an innocent look * Happy?


Chris: Yeah,But im telling momma!!


Chanelle: Do!... And supposedly, out of the mist, someone tells her that a cetain son of hers sneaks out of his hotel room, for a certain female.


Chris: Do and I'll tell her who REALLYjump-


Narrator: There was a knock on the door. Chanelle was the one who got-up and aproached the door.


Chanelle: *In a deep voice* Who is it?!?!?


Voice: Girl!!! If you don't open this door, I will-


Narrator: Without hesitation, Chanelle opened the door.


Chanelle: Hey Momma!! How was your sleep?


Mom: Peaceful... I didn't have two teenager Browns fighting in my room.


Chanelle: Now momma, we don't FIGHT all the time.


Mom: If 3x a day isn't ALL the time. Y'all have 2 fight at breakfeast, lunch, and dinner, atleast.


Chris: Hey, momma!!


Mom: To give y'all what ya Uncle sent to ya.


Chanelle: Uncle Cliff always gives good presents.


Chris: Cause you always tell him what you want.


Chanelle: *Gives a mean look* Shut – up!!


Mom: Hmmm.... I don't think you'll like what he gave y'all.


Chris & Chanelle: * Gives serious looks* What are they?


Mom: *Holds in laughter * Googles and a kite!! *Laughes*


Chanelle: Momma, that ain't funny.


Chris: No that ain't.


Mom: To me it is.


Chanelle: *Rolls her eyes* If ya need me, I'll be waiting on the bus to leave.


Chris: I'll be checking out the room.


Narrator: Ummm... Did I mention that the three were on the “Exclusive” tour.


Mom: No... You didn't


Chanelle: *Walks out of the room* And you call youself a narrator.


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Comments:

Here iz my 1st booksie challenge.

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Lol,this is funny haha.Great little story!
:)

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Author Comment:

LAL, thankz!!

haha! luv it! You should make a story out of it!!
Welsey^_^

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I dunno bout dat. But thankz!!



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