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Over the Rainbow

Short Story By: Avril360
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an emo girl..... her parents try to make her happy but they can't. can her best friend save her from killing herself.... can she find the right guy to make her feel better about herself?... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 9, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


She decided to fly, over the rainbow. Her friend, Cassie, knew what that meant. Senior in high school, Britanny, was going to kill herself. She was emo. No matter what her parents did, they couldn't make her happy. They sent on a cruise across the Caribbean Sea. That didn't make her happy. Cassie watched out for Britanny like a hawk. Cassie always tried to hook Britanny up with a guy to help her feel good about herself. But the guys Cassie picked out, was the wrong one. The guys Cassie chooses made her feel even worse. But Cassie had the perfect guy this time, Matt Tanner. Matt made Britanny feel, alive. And Britanny made Matt feel, unstoppable. So Cassie hooked them up. On the first date Matt took Britanny to el amor (the love). Matt made Britanny extremely happy. On that note, Britanny's parents were happy too. Even though Britanny still hated life, she didn't hate it as much. Cassie couldn't believe it, her plan worked this time. One Monday Britanny came to school happy. When Cassie asked her why, Britanny said this "Matt is the best; he makes me feel great about life. Matt, Matt, Matt. On Friday we went to his bedroom when his parents weren't home, we had sex. It was amazing. I could feel orgasm flow through my body. Even though I was screaming like hell, I know he thought I liked it. I'm glad he didn't stop. Of course it was protected, I would never do unprotected. But I mean, Cas, you should get a guy and have sex. It really is quite amazing." Cassie couldn't believe it. A month later I think you can guess. Britanny was lying. It was unprotected. Britanny was a victim of teen pregnancy. She screamed when she found out. Matt wanted this to happen, of course he didn't tell everyone, but I mean he didn't want to. Nine months later it was time to give birth. In August of 2008, she gave birth to a lovely baby boy, Bradley. Matt had to find out all over school. Britanny didn't go to college; she was to busy being engaged to Matt Tanner. They got married on Valentines Day. Britanny was happy. She wasn't emo anymore. She didn't want Bradley (Brad) to be emo, so she spoiled him. She took him on their vacations and bought him nice toys. The day they had sex, Britanny will always remember the orgasm. When Bradley was ten, Britanny became emo again. A year later she wasn't happy with way things were going at work (she was a baker at Costco) so on August 25, 2018, Britanny killed herself. One day before Bradley's 11th birthday, his present had to be finding out his mom was dead. Before she died, she bought Bradley a nice new cell phone. When Bradley turned fifteen he was too upset with the pain of losing his mother, he killed himself on his 16th birthday. Now his dad Matt Tanner is married to a super model and is living a fabulous life in LA with 3 glorious children Brad jr., Katie and Peter.


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Everyone about to write a comment, excuse the fact that there are weird 'a' things. i couldn't control that!!!!

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

OMFG!!! this is sooooo sad!!!! i wanted to cry!!! it was so well written though, i liked it, cept that it was so sad and depressing!!

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you... it took me three days to write!!!!! thank you so much for the comment!!!!

Well THAT was extremely depressing. Ha Ha but a good write. Just you went really fast. It didn't seem like much of a story. There was no dialogue, no real plot, and you went so fast that everything was happening at once. SLOW DOWN. Still a great story, and I'm about to go read the sequel! :D

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanxx!!! check out my new novel!!!

Nice work, loved the content, but it would have been easier to read with some indents and/or line breaks.

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah..... i put them in but when i go to check it out, it doesn't publish them like dat.... i dunno y...

it went by so fast i was all like "what the hell. its over? thats no fun" it was really good but i think you have to slow down. but other than that i love it.

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanxxxx...in my next short story i will make sure to slow it down... to tell you the truth, a lot of people say that and it's getting kinda annoying, so if you could read the previous comments before you make one that will be great.. try not to repeat what other people say... when i get another repeated comment i'll be like "what the hell" and not reply... soo... srry for being rude but it's da truth



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