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Across the Universe

Short Story By: BrokenGirl
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I dunno.. just kinda wrote it one day. Not really sure what its about, theories greatly apprieciated. :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 1, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 0    Likes: 2   


A girl  looks down at the lake, it's perfect shining surface. It is like an endless sheet of glass, stretching on and on until there was nothing left. Across the universe. However, she knows that underneath the beautiful silvery moonlight shine is a cold, black lake swimming with creatures, cold and dark as a winter's night. She stares down at the girl in the water, and the girl stares up at her. Both shed a single tear onto the water`s mirror-like surface. A small ripple distorts the water, spreading farther and farther, an echo to the ends of the universe.


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