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Short story By: Doodle Girl

This is my first contest! Please leave a comment saying the title of you entry!

~Doodle Girl

Submitted:May 30, 2011    Reads: 50    Comments: 9    Likes: 0   

Continue the following paragraph in short story format. You can be as creative as you want. It is first person narrative, and the main character is named Elena.


Please no erotica.

Must be PG, or G

Have fun!

The wind in the alley is considerably strong, and it tosses my hair around, that Mother had spent so much time grooming. My dress is torn, and dirty now, and I had already washed the make up off of my face. I can't go back into that building, where I ran away from my vows. I can't go back into that building, where I humiliated myself, and broke his heart. So, here i sit...in the window of the run down church...and wait. I don't know what I waited for, maybe somebody to come out and comfort me...but nobody did. I sat there for forty minutes. before I went back inside. And when I entered, I wished I hadn't.


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