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Hey guys this is my first story and this is what I have so far please leave comments on it. I would really appreciate it. I have a question for you all if you didn't know I wrote it would you think it would have came out of a book?

Submitted:Oct 21, 2011    Reads: 24    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   

" Hey its me again. Um........ just give me a call back. I miss you. Bye"

Dimitri scenes that the love of his life, Valina, is in trouble ,big trouble. He wonders if she is mad at him. No, it couldn't be that, she hasn't ever not called him at least twice a day.

"Valina, where are you?" Dimitri suddenly gets a vision from Valina. She is in a dark, damp, moldy cellar almost like a dungeon.

" Dimitri help me! I've been captured by," there is a pause in her voice as Dimitri waits, " Dragomire Vaitallie!"

Dimitri knew it, " Hold on and don't tell him anything. I already know what he wants and what he isn't going to get. I love you Valina. Be careful."

" I love you too Dimitri and I will." Dimitri and Valina have a special connection that no other vampires have and the only way this connection can be ended is if you kill one of them, but Dragomire isn't after that. His worst fear has been realized.

" Be strong my Princess, I'm coming." Dragomire is Dimitri's worst enemy. Three years ago Dragomire turned and killed both families of Dimitri and Valina. Since then they have been keeping tabs on him. It seems to be that Dragomire has been keeping tabs on them too. Dimitri packs his bag expecting the worst is to come. Meanwhile Valina hears Dragomire coming.

" Hello Princess. You know what it is that I desire."


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