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the real monster

Short story By: Gracegirl72

Remembering the day of her death Noelle's spirit from hell comes to reminder her that she doesn't know the whole story.Revealing true facts of her death that jesus tried to save her from.

Submitted:Jul 23, 2014    Reads: 20    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   

The Walk of Remembrance
The water stung my face as i fell into the river. Well at least it didn't hurt as bad as the shot in the right side of my body. The man who murdered me threw daisies in the water. So after i died my soul evaporated into an exact figure of myself only shattering as wind blew threw me. It reformed and it killed the murderer. I teleported into my bathtub where there were daisies floating in the water. This were i was at before i left for the walk. i got out of the tub my eyes were on fire literally. I then was back in the tub coming out of the water. i was wearing the same floral top and greyish-lavender pants. Then I left the apartment to a choppy mixture of voices exclaiming Noelle, don't go stay for the sake of your afterlife. This time walking to the bridge, but instead of being shot by the monster i shot myself and jumped into the river. I'm the real monster. Choppy voices said "i'm so, so sorry that you had to know this, i tried to stop you, I'm so sorry.


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