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This may be a depressing story, but it's the best I could do with the words I was given! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 18, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


The gust of wind blew eastbound as the intense sensation of fright overwhelmed Granny Hudson. She went to the gypsy of her town semiweekly to retrogress. She loved to hear the unbroken voice of this woman. That day, she and her prodigious amount of clothes, walked silently to the gypsy’s hut. She wanted to procure more knowledge about her childhood. The gypsy noticed how old Granny Hudson seemed every time she came to her hut. She, also, noticed how much Granny was forgetting each visit she made to her. She always told her about her cats and her siblings, but today, Granny Hudson did not come up to her hut when she was supposed to. 

            The sad ending to this story is that Granny Hudson died on her travels because her heart died when she heard her brother was killed. The gypsy heard of her death and she closed shop for two weeks. This may not be a happy tale, but not all stories end with Happily Ever After, right?


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Comments:

Right you are, and if they did it would get boring. I think you could've made quite an elaborate story of this.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad u r a faithful fan!

So true, so true dat is a simple but sad story, I liked it.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm so happy u read my stuff!

true so true, not everything is happy and full of rainbows

Posted: Jul 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya know that's right! Thanks 4 reading my story! I'd be honored if u tried my challenge!

a very sad tale indeed ,
you have such a talent . i am so hoping that future stories will at least attempt to explain lifes beauty.

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL! Some of my other stories do, if u check them out!

Hmm...sad but then u r right...all the stories need not have a happy ending...this is sensible though...

voted for it and will vote for all ur posts..i really like ur style...

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Ahh...thanks! U r too sweet!

I enjoyed it. It was interesting and short but in a good and to the point kind of way. Keep up the good work :]

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I would love to hyear ya comments on my script! Thanks!

simple, sad but nice at the same time. its true-not every story has to have a happy ending.

good one ^^
cya =]

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! ♥ jfm98



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