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10th Grade

Short Story By: Moonie
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I'm not really in 10th grade or any of the the other charactors.........and the pic is of James and Silver. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 4, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


"Ahhhhhh.......The first day of school the smell of new pencils, more drama,and cruddy teachers" I thought as I walked off my bus. "Hmm I wonder where Silver is?" I thought as I looked around the crouds of other High Schoolers. Then I saw Nick standing in his ushual way up agenst the wall, "Nick! Nick!!" I yelled over the very nosieness of the bus ramp, He looked derectly my way and smiled. I squirmed my way through people and backpacks to get over to Nick, which took alot of effort, I finally got there. "Hey did you shrink over the summer Char?" he saidcalling me that nick-name only he called me. "Ha-ha very funny....I missed you"I said as I hugged him "What did you do all summer?". He thought a moment then stated "Um....Igot my permitt and a job at Target....You?" "Me I got my permitt too and what a quinkie-dink I got a job at my favorite store, Target too!"I said joyfully "When do you start?" I asked "Thursday" He said "Ha! I start Friday!" I said matterafactly. "Hey have you see Silver or James?" "No I haven't where could they be?" he said looking around and then back down at me. Then I looked into his big black eyes and it was one of those moments where like it seems everyone on the entire planet had stopped talking. But then that moment was overWhen I heard someone scream over EVERYONE elce "CHARLOTTE!!! CHARLOTTE!!!!" That someone would be Silver.............


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Comments:

Cool. Are you going to write more?

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Yup....I already have everything for the next one.

HI CHARLETTE!
XD.
Wait. Wheres my loveable James?
Why am I the pyco?
Why are you so calm and cool?
I thought you were th pyco and I was the....
Bit more call one.

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!! Don' REVAL my idenity!! he just dosn't talk in this one no sweat. And hey I WAS the one who punched someone in the ribs for no reason.

I WANNA PUNCH SOMEONE

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

WHO?!?! AND I WANNA PUNCH THESE TWO GIRLS THAT MADE FUN OF ME CAUSE I SNORT WHEN I LAUGH!!!

You snort when you laugh?
Good story, I'm planning to read the rest.

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Yha I do can't help it some people think it's cute others make fun of me.......

hi! shelby. a throbbing school scene. i liked the intro to nick and char and that 'one moment' between the two is the life of this chapter. i can imagine what it'd be like with silver and james around. must be fireworks. this is friendly. liked it. lol. ;-)

Posted: Nov 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks bubbly!! It acctually has me and my best friend in it!!



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