*ooh chills* This was really cool. I love how all the scenes keep changing and then the last one is completely different from the rest. :) Amazing!

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Oh, don't worry... I got it alright. That was the chilling part. LOL. :)

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Wow... this is like a mix between the X-men and Deffinitely, Maybe!!!!!! I like-- I like^_^! You caught my attention and held it, throughout the piece. The ending is a huge surprise!!!!! I loved it!

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

This is excellent Steph.

Posted: Mar 26, 2008

Wow, there's so many questions, it leaves me wanting more! This was brilliant Steph, really enjoyed it. ~ Nixie

Posted: Mar 26, 2008

the memories story.
Nicely done

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

this is brilliant,
you are such a talented writer.
Kepp it ups!
=]
-Ally

Posted: May 16, 2008

Steph, u must write a sequelae....nope, on second thoughts , this ending is better...it leaves us with plenty of room to appreciate the beauty of this complexity of human nature......lol

*sighing*

Posted: May 25, 2008

That was really good Steph, I couldn't wait to see what happened at the end (good ending by the way)! Well thanx for reading mine and posting. See ya, Mel♥

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

That was awesom, wow! I didn't know you wrote stuff like that girl! I loved it;)

Posted: Jun 18, 2008