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The Hawker

Short Story By: whitehart
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Tags: life, of, a, hawker

I was in a buss going home last night when I was touched by the facial expressions of some of the hawkers selling their wares to moving vehicles. It was at that moment that this piece was inspired! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 9, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


 

THE HAWKER

He wakes up early in the morning,

To the noise of the wife making his lunch,

And the children preparing to go to school,

There will be no breakfast today,

"The gods were not so kind,”

He explains to his children.

They haven’t been kind for over a month now

10 O’clock, the day is not promising,

"Buy some, buy some, everything only ten shillings”

He has only made twenty shillings commission,

And all that had to go to the city council.

"Buy some, buy some, good prize for everything!”

He sells two bunches as his stomach grumbles,

He thinks of his children

Thankful the school offers 10 o’clock porridge.

Evening comes and he decides to hit the traffic jams,

"Buy some, buy some, everything only ten shillings”

He calls out to the passing cars,

Wearing his look of confidence

"Confidence sells” his boss always says,

He calls out to the men his children admire,

In their flashy cars and suits,

Probably spent the whole day sitting in their offices,

He had dreams that ended like that too, he thinks,

But his reality is standing the whole day!

The gods send two more his way,

Then his blessings for the day are done!

9p.m. and he knows it’s time to do the dreadful,

A two mile walk back to his home

Makes it just in time to see his children hit the sacks,

"The children can share half a loaf tomorrow”

He tells his wife,

"The rest we save for rent”

His day’s earning was fifty shillings.

The gods had been kinder,

His wife had made the same on the streets

Hopefully, after the rent,

They will have enough for ¼ beef!

Hopefully……

He drifts off to sleep,

Dreaming of his riches!


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Comments:

Great job. You really climbed inside the life of a hawker and visualized what it must be like. Impressive insight.

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Buttercup. Glad you liked it

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THATS EXACTLY WHAT I MEAN..their is THAT mans life and his simple reasoning .All captured in those few words which express perfectly that which you saw with your eyes in passing...now take on the kids...

Posted: Apr 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha....glad you liked it. I will get to working with the kids as soon as possible! Thanks for kinda leading me to them!

nice work man I liked it has a nice aspt to it

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Glad you liked it. I tried to get into the hawkers shoes as much as possible and try to get the message across!

Good work Deb

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Brian

a slice of life most people don't see / ignore / or pretend doesn't exist. I would buy, if I could.

nicely written, Deb

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment. Yeah,I buy from them too, I just can't help it sometime. Take care

This very touching. Nice work

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

I was reminded of millions of Hawkers back home in India selling varities of things in scorching sun, thunder, hailstorm, fever, .....only to get money for feeding their kids .....
And how much granted we all take for the clothing, shelter and food provided by the Almighty.

i am indeed ashamed that i complain and whine when that hawker sleeps content even with empty tummy....

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I thihk you got the lesson Pratibha....next time we want to be ungrateful over something...we should remember people like this hawker. Thanks for the comment.



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