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the bestfriends

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its a first person story hope ya like comment plzz


Submitted:Mar 1, 2011    Reads: 36    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


i stood there watching her like a hawk she wouldnt move. i knew something was wrong... i walked up to her and said " who has done this to you".she replied "i never want to see you again". in an instant i stood their as silent as ever glaring at her thinking... for a momment i knew their was this girl her names lola.shes mean vicious,cruel,bad and everything worse you can think of. she had told her something that i didnt know... i stood up strong walked to lola and punched her i didnt know what i just did.i unleashed hell.my bestfriend carly came and said "why did you do that". i looked fearless and said "she told you something that is not true and i will not stand for it" carly looked at me with evilness in her eye and said" its not her im just moving away forever... i cant stand to see you knowing im going to be away from you" this was the sadest momment of my life...




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