Its the first chapter of a book I've written. I left out the middle of it because it's the longest. I need feedback to know how others opinions. I am open to all types of critic from grammar to content.
| Updated Mar 25, 2009
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Tera lives in a world that confuses her. Ever since her parents divorce her life has changed. She is never sure whether she hates her life or likes it. This story is about Tera's life.
Authers note: I might have some spelling mistakes! Please enjoy.
| Updated Mar 10, 2009
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THIS is a story about a girl who left home at a young age to help her step-sister. And she lived her life alone, and was very lonley. She taught her self thing's that she needed to know. And while she went on she went on through life with other people's critism. She became somebody.