This is the lullaby of two persons-obviously; one is male, the other, female- as true love strikes in the midst of a night.
Though as we know, love lost is better than no love at all, but sometimes parting is such a sweet sorrow, that it will burn and burn till no end.
(( If you notice throughou...
This is what happens when you like someone, and then they pretty much betray you. The pain comes, making you feel like you're being torn in two. Well, that's what happened to me. Now things have gone wrong, left me feeling numb. I don't know if I'll ever get better this time.
Realizing I had depression, none of my friends were there for me. Thy said they didn't know what to say because they've never been in my position, but you don't realize how much a "how are you" would of made me feel.
So, this poem is my first shot of a sonnet. It is totally different from everything i have written so far. This is a Patrachan Sonnet; Shakesperian was way too rigid and hard to write. so this was my first try and it came out to be fantastic, hope you guys like it too. This poem is way too genera...
Random rhymes that I just put together. It's not a fantastic piece of poetry, but I'm happy I at least rhymed a little for once. (:
Comments or criticisms are welcomed! Some advice would help too! ;)
Well, i just love this one because it so so vividly describing the moments feeling.. it's just venting of feelings i've had for quite a long time in my life. And it is also special because i wrote it while i feeling boring rather than emotional (i only write when i am an emotional wreck:P). It's ...