This is the extended version of Dance of Ashes, there's also a revised version~I really messed with this one. I only published this alternate version, to humor Peach, who wanted more details...it's a bit more wordy, but maybe it will give more insight into the meaning of the Dance of Ashes.
Booksie writer â€œAntâ€ challenged other writers to attempt a song.
After making the commitment, felt obligated to take a shot
at it. Here is the result; doubt that it could ever be put
to music though....had loads of fun giving it my silly doodle!
This poem is about the sound of the actual words seed and bean, I tried to make it so it got people to think about the sound of the words. This was the first poem I ever wrote so I'm not sure how good it is, I would appreciate your comments.
Thank you to ALL the booksie users that participated in my challenge to create a rainbow poem. I recived so many great entries I couldnt choose. So, I'm using all the entries I recieved!! Hope you enjoy. I take no credit for these poems for they were not written by me.
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