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Thoughts of a poet

Article By: The Forgiven
Poetry


Tags: you, sow, a, thought, you, reap, some, action;

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Submitted: Jul 13, 2008    Reads: 17    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


YOU SOW A THOUGHT, YOU REAP SOME ACTION;

YOU SOW THE ACTION, YOU REAP A HABIT;

YOU SOW THE HABIT, YOU WILL REAP A CHARACTER;

YOU SOW CHARACTER, YOU REAP DESTINY.

                     WHAT I MEAN IS OUR THOUGHTS PRECEED EVERY BEAUTIFUL CREATION.

AND POETRY IS ONE SUCH MASTERPIECE.

           AND THE WORLD WILL SEEM BEAUTIFUL ONLY WHEN WE LET OUR MINDS THINK, INSTEAD OF OUR FEARS, HOPES, AND OUR WISHES.


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Comments:

Just thinking the last phrase would read better as -

AND THE WORLD WILL be BEAUTIFUL WHEN WE LET OUR MINDS flow free, Ignoring OUR FEARS of the darkness.

Well, thats my view anyway.

Nicely done.














Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Well, suggestions are always welcome.
And your suggestion was apprieciated.
Thanking you. Hope to read more from you in future.
Bonjour!



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