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Alice's Challenge

By: Alice Oiseau
Poetry


I feel so unoriginal doing this... -_-'

But I figured it was about time I opened one.
Plus it will be fun :)

[!CAUTION!]
May cause brain to explode due to over challenging...

Hello my friends...
...Brace yourselves... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 19, 2008    Reads: 217    Comments: 72    Likes: 5   


Alice's Challenge... XD

Hokay - so this is my challenge and it will be challenging. Though I hope its not too challenging...

Here we go:

You must write a poem. Select your difficulty level on a scale of 1-10, 1 being easy and 10 being challenging. I will provide you the subject that the poem will be about along with the setting, where the poem must take place. I will then give you 6 words that must be used in the poem - but they can't take away from the subject or setting!

Note: The higher the difficulty level, the more requirements.

Difficulty levels 7+ must include a metaphor - not a simile. There's a difference. A metaphor is a comparison between two things without using "like" or "as", whereas a simile is a comparison between two things using "like" or "as".

Those who are daring enough to pick a 10 must have the metaphor and also include an allusion

An allusion (not illusion) is a reference to a well known literary piece of work or a well known historical event.

Ex: In my poem Forthcoming Renaissance After The Gloom there is the allusion to the Red Sea:

After all the misery,
The pain,
The dark,
All the tears to fill an ocean,

I gracefully cross my own Red Sea of salvation

** Please in your summaries include a side note of the allusion. I don't know everything there is to know, so I may not be able to pick up on it. If you provide an explanation/background info that will save me from googling it and trying to research it **

And so that is my challenge.

Brace yourselves...

But more importantly...

Have fun! ^^


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Comments:

oki doki then I think I'll a five! haha not too hard, but not too easy

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

ah, you are the first brave soul to step up to the challenge. i congratulate you :)

hmm. a five. all right then ^^

subject: a fire fairy (yes, like a fairy only its of the element of fire)
setting: a snowglobe

humm dee dumm and your words:

desires
misfortune
admonish
idealistic
shatter
remedy

i hope thats not too hard. i think you can blend them pretty well, but if you are honestly struggling, let me know and i'll see what i can do. sound good?

good luck, have fun, and let me know when its posted :)

i wanna go with six. I know, I'm being a chicken b/'c I'm not going with 7, but oh well. also, do we have to have a simile if uts below 7 (instead of using a metaphor)?
~Lemon

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

nope, you don't have to use a simile. the metaphor is just for 7 and higher. you can use a simile if you want ^^ but its not required :)

ah a six... well then.

subject: spider monkey
setting: rainforest

your words:

spirit
freedom
violin
chocolate
banana
dreaming

not too challenging i hope?
good luck and have fun ^^

OMG The best challenge I've seen so far and it sounds SOOO GOOOD. Eh but the six words really make it tough...well as long as they're not stupidly difficult and random haha..

hmmm do I want to tackle the allusion...really depends on the subject doesn't it...but I won't know...HmMmMmMm

Okay, how about this, I will take a 10, but you give me something a little flexible so I can work in the metaphor and the allusion ??? kkk? thx!

I love being challenged ahaha. Let's say how long this takes me.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

oh gosh controverse, dont even get me started on random words lol you saw my last poem. THAT was random words, haha! okay, so i'll be a little flexible because i don't know if you're much of a poet... i'll be nice ^^ lol

subject: music box
setting: The Louvre in Paris, France

six words:

ameliorate
enticing
pugnacious
taciturn
lady
sanguine

i was nice. i threw in lady to help make things easier lol but remember, don't let that take away from your subject. your allusion and metaphor can be whatever you wish, as long as you include it. it doesnt have to be any of the words or subject, just so you know.

good luck :)

im gonna try a 10 >:]
i had to do a little poem in social studies so i guess ill take a punch @ it

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

haha you seem awfully confident!

subject: roulette
setting: Venice, Italy

hmmm your words:

oblige
phantom
castigation
asphyxiate
Euros (the european currency)
embrace

challenging, eh? i hope so! you asked for a ten! be prepared to meet your doom!! mwuahahahaha!

lol ok - good luck and have fun ^^

10 my angel ^^

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

ha i knew you would go for a 10. i've been planning your words since the moment i started the challenge lol
all right darling, here we go!

subject: skeleton key
setting: Eiffel Tower in Paris, France

your words:

pulchritudinous
seraphic
atrabilious
crystalline
nefarious
anathematize

bonne chance! ;)

I'll take a 5...been struggling to find my words... they are there... just not going to the paper... so give me a shot

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hm a 5. alrighty. that's nice to hear. after coming up with 3 tens in a row... lol

subject: hourglass
setting: a dungeon

words:

faith
harp
corpse
loquacious
smitten
indigo

enjoy ^^ and let me know when its up!

10, of course! Figures of speech, eh? Well, I love them all. I might take a while to post it, though, since there is not going to be a respite from work this weekend.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

ah that's okay. i understand. i get rather busy too. when you do get the chance to take a breather, then you can work on the poem. no rush ^^

subject: a baseball
setting: Caribbean (gosh that sounds nice right about now lol)

haha your words:

pretentious
conflagration
malleable
affusion
beelzebub
dystopia

have fun and let me know when its up ^^

Hello,
i love this challenge, its got my creative juices flowing and i cant wait to get started. O.K i too will go for a 10! hey i have a reputation to safeguard lol. I might be a bit late cuz i am already working on another challenge and i always end up taking a long time cuz i edit my poems several times. Oh one more thing, can the allusion be about theology and South Asian myth.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

ah, there is no rush to post it ^^ take your time on it (especially since you'll have a 10, you'll need the time haha)

about the allusion: yes! many, many allusions are made to mythology and even theology (with theology the allusions are more biblical references, but obviously the bible isn't the only thing out there with theological allusions!) thus you can use either or for your allusion. just remember, an allusion is usually well known - i'm not expecting to know it b/c i don't know a thing about south asain myths lol - but if you were to give the poem to a cultured person, they would read it and be able to know what it is. you see what i'm saying? it has to be well known enough that there's a large group that would know it.
i'm glad you brought this up, b/c that is the reason i want the background info included in your summary lol i don't know all there is to know, so things like these i'll need a quick mini lesson on before i read the poem. so yeah, good question. lol

now lets get on with your doom!

subject: feather quill pen/ink bottle that goes with it
setting: Mars (yes, the planet Mars - hope those creative juices stay flowing lol)

your words:

pendulum
fabricate
cloister (used as a verb)
massacre
vengeance
euphoric

have fun ^^ and let me know what its posted!

Hi alice:)
Yay, i've been wanting to do a challenge...it all sounds very exciting! Ok, i think give me a 6, if you please. And it's my first time--so go easy on me:)

Much love
Ash

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

aw, your first time ^^ i'll be nice then... lol its a good thing i have a heart, even if i've lost my mind hahahaha XD

subject: fireflies
setting: summer evening

your words:

caress
alter
plead
melancholy
snowflakes
photograph

hm.. :) i think you'll be able to come up with something. hope its not too challenging, but challenging enough that you have to think on it ^^
have fun and let me know when its posted!

I've got two days away from home to think about this! Give me a ten! I feel up to the challenge ;)

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha, well then, if you insist...

subject: chandelier
setting: desert

six words:

presumptuous
blasphemy
henotheism
mephitical
throttle (used as verb)
hibernate

good luck!!

okay, i'm leaving for a week long vacation tomorrow, but if you don't mind it being late then i pick 8.

L ♥

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

there's no rush to getting the poem up ^^

an 8... hmm. all right then.

subject: quicksand
setting: ballroom

words:

stumble
baneful
desultory
cascade
mourn
anagorisis

good luck!!

Yikes, sounds pretty hard.... Okay.
Hmmm...

Gimme a .... (dun, dun, dunnnnn).... a 7.
I do pretty well with metaphors. Not so good with allusions, though. If you'd like, peek through a few of my poems to get a feel for what I write about.

*Whew*.... Wish me luck!

MA

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

ah, normally i would MA, but the point of challenges is to put you out of your comfort zone and write something that you normally don't write. stretch your mind! so brace yourself. you were wise to pick a 7!

subject: ribbons and bows
setting: opera house

words:

boast
scream
audacious
brittle
phalanx
whisper

good luck!! let me know when its up ^^

Hhhmmm...we've got a Literature Teacher here, huh. ^^ I thought you'd also want it metrical with all the rhyme and all. ^^ I'll take your bait, Alice. May I ask for my LUCKY 7?

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

oh yes, lol i am a literature NERD and proud of it XD gosh, when i graduated third grade, my teacher gave me a book about grammer for a present since she had seen how much i loved to write - and i loved it XD hahaha!
all right. another 7.
here we go!

subject: diary
setting: the Titanic (whether it has sunk or not is up to you. if you chose anything higher i would make it take place in the sunken ship!)

your words ^^

tiara
witness
chimerical
naive
pigment
aviation

i think you can handle that, nothing too hard. but i hope its not easy.
have fun!!

ok Alice, of course i'd b delighted, but my poetry is not too good so be kind. I'll take an 8 but i'll use an allusion too. Be kind oh sweet Alice!!!

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

mwuahahahaha! you fell into my trap!

ha, jk, jk!
i'll be nice, i promise :)
hm, confident enough to do an allusion... but not confident enough to go for a 10... hmmm.
pfft and your poetry is too good! you modest english people... i don't know what to do with you! :P

haha, all right. here we go!

subject: dry ice (i'm expecting you to be creative with this b/c dry ice is one cool subject)
setting: castle

hm. and now for your 6 words...

captivate
alluring
indulge
taunt
approbative
crucify

the first 3 words can easily go together - then the next 3 it begins to get a little tricky. however i'm confident that you can do it ;)
good luck!! have fun!! and let me know what its posted ^^

It's up! :D Wow, that took less time than I thought it would. Haha... Go read it! I hope it doesn't suck too much :P

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

oh my goodness that was wicked fast!! lol i'll go check it out :)

HIYA ALICE....

Can I try too??

BUT iF U WON't Roll off laughing, i would go by 5...hee heee.....

Thanks HONEY....

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

oh a 5! yay! i'm so happy you joined in ^^ and even more so that you picked a 5! i was worried you would pick a lower number when i know you are capable of doing a higher number.
all right hon, here we go!

subject: butterfly
setting: jewelry box

your words:

hinder
escape
frail
dare
cadence
reminisce

have fun ^^ and let me know what its up :)

tin2twinkling
(not registered user)

hi alice!! may i join too? i'll try a 10... i hope i do good on this one...

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

sure thing ^^

might i ask how you will post it if you don't have an account though?

subject: a glass menagerie
setting: in a puddle of water

your words :)

toxic
tickle-me-pink (hahaha)
geisha
beatle
bloodcurdling
ominous

there we go ^^ have fun! erm... and good luck posting?

oooohhhh Allliiiicccceee!!!!!!!!!! You know what I want :) ha ha. 10 Please! Just to let you know, the words, I'm confident won't be much of a problem, it's the allusion that's going to be a pain. ( I never was good with references) *sigh*

But I dare you... give me your BEST shot!! >:-)

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

the second i clicked on that "new messages" box and saw your name i was like "oh great. here comes angela" lol
i knew you would ask for a 10. i should have pre-planned your words like i did with punishment's... curses!

subject: doll house
setting: Venus

your words:

chastisement
painstakingly
capitulate
evanescence (yes its an actual word and not just a band)
picaresque
virgin


haha i dont know if that was my best, but i certaintly hope its challenging! i think i gave my best to punishment -_-'
have fun! and let me know when its up :)

I'll try. Give me a ten. I need something challengeing.
~Kaori

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

oi you people are damanding monkeys!! hahahaha!
ok.
a 10...

subject: kleenex
setting: Atlantis

your words:

bamboozled
euphemism
acclimatization
ululation
serene
lilliputian

HA! how's that for challenging!
have fun ^^ let me know when its posted!

Hey Alice, the setting and the words are great. But baseball, aaargh! Nobody plays baseball in India (thank goodness!). Could you give me another subject please? Baseball block my vision.....

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Are you really struggling that much with baseball? You can't find any metaphoric way to look at it?? Or symbollic? Try digging a little deeper.

Tell you what - I'll make a deal. Think on it for a few days and if you absolutely positively have NOTHING and can't make it work, I'll give you a different subject :)
Fair enough?

Oh wow. *gets excited*
I wanna try it too. :d Um, I'll have a 6? xD

Thanks.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

*phew* thank goodness. my brain is getting tired of all these 10's lol

subject: lightbulb
setting: igloo

your words:

linger
silhouette
seize
inspiring
ambivalent
benevolent

have fun!

I think I'll have a 6. I don't know though, I'm not the best poet.
~Maple Bowen

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Ah, well this will be an opportunity to become that poet you wish to be ^^
a 6 it is!

subject: ruby
setting: behind a waterfall

words:

humor
persevere
weep
amaranthine (and i want you to use this specific definition for it- unfading; everlasting)
starlight
crescent

have fun ^^ let me know when its up

Oh-No...should I? shouldn't I ? hmmmmmmmm
and I wasn't going to BUT, sinse you asked then Ok :)

ya, I really took some time about this one I wanted too but I kept chickening out LOL, so but then I was at my page and saw your post, and so I just couldn't say no ^_^

well, then here goes; I guess I'll take lucky number 7

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

lol don't chicken out! you'll be proud of yourself when you know you've completed it ^^
here you go katie!

subject: seashell
setting: on a bookshelf

words:

mystify
reverie
isolation
rambunctious
soldiers
doll

hm. iuno if thats too easy... but you also have to include a metaphor, so that will make it slightly more challenging...
good luck and have fun!

-stares-
Okay, so I would go for a 10 and all...but your tens are deadly! So 9 please :P

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahahaha! yes, they are indeed deadly >:-]
there's only a few brave souls that go for a ten... mwuahaha!
wise of you to avoid the allusion...
but don't think you have it easy!!! prepare to meet your own doom!!!

subject: sunglasses
setting: Moscow, Russia

hmm and your 6 words

metamorphosis (this is one of my favorite words - dont disappoint me :P)
onomatopoeia
perish
incarnate
sleep
hmm and finally....
stallion

mwuahahaha! >:-]

if its seriously too hard and impossible then let me know. but first let it sit in your thoughts for a few days. let it sink in ^^
good luck!!

Ahh. Well I would choose a 10, but I don't like writing poetry. SO I choose a 9. Could you possibly give me level 10 words though? :) I want difficult words, it's just that I don't want to have to think extra on that allusion stuff. :) Am I making myself clear? I'm sorry if I'm not... my brain is dead right now. *sigh*

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

lol yes, you are crystal clear! ^^

subject: pearls
setting: beach

words:

delineate
oracle
pleurodynia
utopia
ecstasy (just to clarify, i'm pretty sure you know i want the actual word and not the drug)
infanticide

good luck! have fun ^^

-sobs- how come punpun got the eiffel towerrr?! that would actually work for meeeee.
-evil glare at punpun- If looks could only kill....
:D
And I'll totally do this Alicee! It's the hardest challenge I've gotten yet, but I'll do this! >:]

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

punishment got the eiffel tower b/c its special lol
hahaha well killing him would be bad! i'd have to kill you then lol jk!
i'm glad you are determined :D good luck! i'm excited to see what you come up with ^^

A 5 please...I'm lazy

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thats a-okay with me (easier on the brain lol)

hmmmm. all right.
just for laughs, your subject will be: bunny (haha)
setting: at the ocean

your words:

locked
jewel
chateau
whistle
petals
aurora -i'm not referring to the anceint roman goddess either. i want you to use it as what you see in the sky. here's the technical definition:

a radiant emission from the upper atmosphere that occurs sporadically over the middle and high latitudes of both hemispheres in the form of luminous bands, streamers, or the like, caused by the bombardment of the atmosphere with charged solar particles that are being guided along the earth's magnetic lines of force.

you can also google an image to know what i'm talking about if you don't know ^^


good luck and have fun!!! let me know what its up :)

I don't write much poetry but this looks interesting so I think I'll give it a try. I think I'll go with a 5 please.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

okie dokie ^^

subject: oak tree
setting: woods

words:

mightily
shake
palm
shout
narcissism
echo

have fun!! let me know when its up :)

I'm in on the challenge!!
Alright, i choose a difficulty level of six!

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

haha glad to have you in on the challenge ^^ you've now reached the point of no return! mwuahaha!
but you chose a 6 - that was wise of you ^^

subject: rainbow
setting: outside

words:

glisten
reverberate
repercussion
flute
nonchalant
fiery

hows that? not too bad?
good luck and have fun!

Hahaha that sounds fair enough! Will give it a shot.

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

All right! Sounds good ^^ Good luck!! :)

i posted my poem for your challenge! it's called "In My Heaven"!
~Lemon

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

alrighty! i'll go check it out!

I wish to try my hand at a 4, but also give me a 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! !!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

i've read both comments you've left. on the next one you ask for an 11. you're awfully confident. so you want to do 2 poems? one at a 4 level and one at an 10 level? there is no 11 (sorry) it wouldnt be fair to the others.
i'm going to stick with the assumption that you want to do 2 poems.
so here we go for your 4!

subject: teardrops
setting: in a park

words:

dreaming
life
blissful
once
phobia
children

and now for your 10!
subject: compass
setting: New York City, New York

words:

egotistical
irrotationally
transpierce
cataphoresis
preceptor
hmm and your final word that you will regret and wish you hadn't been so confident:

antidisestablishmentarianism

mwuahahahahahaha!!!!
>:-]

good luck! you'll need it!!

NO, wait, i want an 11 :P

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

i would, but it wouldn't be fair to the others. but i gave you some hard level 10 words to make up for it ^^

you are cruel... I REGRET NOTHING! lol i had to look up cataphoresis! Turns out the dictionary don't have it....

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

*points and laughs at reaper*
hahahahahahaha!!!! =P
it is your own fault!! mwuahahahaha!
>:-]

cataphoresis: the causing of medicinal substances to pass through or into living tissues in the direction of flow of a positive electric current.


good luck... lol

omg! I love it! I'll take a ten (what else?) but this one I'm nervous about...oh well ^.^

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

haha good! you should be nervous!
mwuhahaha!

subject: mushroom
setting: in a shoe

(hm. can you say random? haha)

your words:

scintillate
orison
saxophone
bosom - you don't have to take this one literally if you don't want to. try getting creative. ex: the bosom of the earth (which btw you can't use this example in your poem!)
concoct
noxious

have fun ^^ let me know when its up :)

damn right I'm gonna do this challenge, I pick a ten! make it good darlin'!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

ooo! a ten! well ma belle, you asked for it!
bonne chance!!!!

subject: stained glass window
setting: at a lake

words:

impenetrable
schizophrenic
laurustinus
phantasmagoria
stipend
nirvana

let me know when its up!
avez-amuser :)

One of these things is not like the others....I 'll take 9.
Pooour it out birdie.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Mmmkay Peach! You asked for it! >:-D

subject: stapler
setting: mystical forest

words:

transmogrification
dissentience
truncate
aphorism
garrulous
tantamount

good luck!! and have fun ^^

GIVE ME A TEN!!!!! Im pretty good at allusions.

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

confident are we?
a bit TOO confident... let me fix that... mwuhahahahaha!

subject: band-aid
setting: in a dumpster

words:

eschew
vacillation
aloof
neologism
coagulate
synectically

BAM! how's that for you? challening? i hope!
good luck!!

hiiya!x!..
emm.. hmmm.. erm.. i think.. an 8?.. pehaps...
poems arr reallii not mii forte!.. but.. i cn't resist a challenge.. so.. lay it on me!x!..
xoxox
.. bu .. erm.. go easy ook?..
xlolx..
xoxoxoxox
ps.. it might take a while.. earliiest i'd b able to even attempt iit wud b monday.. or tuesday.. k?..

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

hmmm.
to go easy or not? *ponders* do i have a heart or not?
hmmmm.
arg. curse you heart!!!
to go slightly easy it is... but you asked for an 8! it may be slightly easier than some - but i won't let you off the hook completely!

subject: oil lamp
setting: cave

words:

misogynistic
slovenly
dexterous
egregious
incongruous
stolid

before you complain its too hard - your subject and setting go well together. so i wasn't cruel and picked an impossbile setting. your words aren't that difficult - just think on it for a few days and let them sink in ^^ something will come to you ;)

good luck! and have fun!

ok lady, i like what youre spinning...
gimmie a ten
go ahead,
lay one on me.
i can dig it

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

i hope you can dig deep then!

subject: passport
setting: hmm... how about... Hell. i'm just curious to see how that will turn out... so good luck.

your words:

antiphone
fastidious
thermotropism
translucent
baptize
chasten


good luck!
let me know when its up!

........im diving headlong into this and am asking for a TEN!!!!
...oh dear!!!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

"oh dear" is right!!! mwuahahahaha! be prepared to meet your own doom!!!!

subject: roller coaster
setting: indoors

your words:

neurotic
execrate
panegyrical
curmudgeon
intangible
martingale

good luck! have fun!

ten... with a cherry on top! jk, but still a 10... btw, do the words have to be in order? I hope not, I think better if they don't have to be! :D Let me know!

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

haha noooo, they don't have to be in order. i'm not that evil =P haha

subject: pictureless picture frame
setting: Catholic church (Catholic churches are different than most churches because they will have a lot more "busy" paintings on the walls [baroque art] and they will have saints everywhere whereas most protestant churches are awfully plain and simple - thus find a way to show its a Catholic chuch and not just any other church)

your words:

lassitude
myriad
quagmire
accentuate
perfunctory
circumspect

good luck! have fun! ^^

oookkkk... i think i cn handle that...
i think...
xlolx..

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

lol well, let the words sit in your mind for a few days ^^ good luck!

Hello,
i was just working on my poem and thought to torture you with what i came up with, behold the first stanza,

"As I sit upon my August perch and gaze at my dominion,
long ago it felt so large filled with all my minions,
I can still recall how the red earth pulsed beneath our marching feet,
How often we would all rejoice in our "EUPHORIC" deeds."

Now miss Alice, i will leave you the unpleasant job of wondering what the hell i am writing about, just remember "curiosity killed the cat" LOL.

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

lol not bad for a beginning - but can you handle the rest? *raises an eyebrow and looks at azmat* yeah, we'll see how well that poem turns out mister...
haha

erm.. one more thing.. im realli sorri bout dis but pleeeezz .. pleeeezz..
cn yooh swap the word misogynistic.. for another word!.. any other word really... just that .. the bits of words nd phrases i scribbled dwn seem to finally be coming to gether to form... erm.. something..
but.. i jus cnt fit misogynistic in!x!..
pleeeezz!x!..
*puppy dog eyes!*
xoxoxoxox

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

*sighs* because you have an 8, and not a 10, i'll change it ^^

your new word: suffrage

good luck ^^

Hi, Alice. My response poem is now up. =] It's called "When Darkness Falls"
Please tell me what you think.

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

oh exciting! i like the title already! i'll go check it out :)


i think u made some of my words up.
i really do.

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

haha i promise you all of them are in the dictionary!

I agree with the comment directly above me!!!

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

o.O

are you guys serious? i'll go check into it if this is a problem...

hiii!x!..
tnkoo soo much for swapping mii word..
nehoo.. i've put up mii response.. it's calld my incandescence.. plz read nd tel me wot yooh tink!x!..
xox tnx xoxo

ps.. to the two ppls above me..
i dnt tink she made dem up.. its jus som dictinaries dnt av certain words.. cs some of the words i ws tryin to put in mii poem.. i cudn't find dem in som other dictionaries...
try dictionary.com
xoxo

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

oh i know all the words are real. peach was just teasing and i think frankie was just teasing as well. but i know all of them are real words. i checked dictionary.com for all of them just in case ^^
as for your poem - i'll go check it out!

......haha aww im sorry alice. i have to put this comment on here cuz for somereason i cant put it up on ur page. but yes! i was just bugging u. i know theyre real words. theyre just.. kinda fantastic. lol! i am however, convinced that my math teacher makes up words. hes a very strange man.. lol

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

lol oook! i asked peach and she said she was just teasing. but when you get 2 comments in a row teasing you, then you get a little worried lol

Come on over to "Jump Off The Stage at Kiyomizu" Alice.

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

ha that's quite the mouthful
i'll be over shortly ^^

i'll try a 5

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

okie dokie ^^

subject: piano
setting: in a rainstorm (hope that's not too difficult)

words:

immortal
yearn
dawn
tenderly
symphony
dance

have fun ^^

i hope its not too late to join the challenge!


eeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrmmmmmmmmm............lemme se............i guess i'll go for 7..............

Oh dear ALICE please have mercy *looks at alice with puppy face*,...............please give the words keeping in mind that i have just started attempting challenges!!!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

haha no its not too late ^^
a 7! and you expect me to show mercy?! HA! - jk, i'll be nice :) its only a 7. anything higher though and i'd have to become evil lol

subject: teady bear (awww ^^)
setting: on the side of a street - :( thats sad but you can make an interesting poem out of it ^^

words:

lassitude
accost
beatific
somber
docile
vapid

good luck! have fun ^^

Okay, took me long enough to decide, if I should accept this challenge or not.....I don't know that much about poetry concerning metaphors, and etc....but I will give it a try.....my first time, go easy on me, so I say for starters a "4"....I'm not that confident when it comes to these challenges. :)Thks

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

well a 4 will be easy ^^ no metaphor or anything snazzy. just stick to the subject and setting and include the words :)

subject: toy soldiers
setting: on a toy store shelf

words:

visage
book
sorrow
love
cherish
life

have fun ^^ i'm sure you'll make a great poem!

Hey. My response poem is up. It's called "Through the Woods".
Enjoy

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

great! i'll go read it ^^

I'd like to go at # 5 because ehhh I've seen your challenges of subject I'll start off soft !!!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahaha! looks like i'm getting a reputation for handing out something surely challenging.
all righty
a 5 it is!

subject: black and white photograph
setting: in a photo album

words:

caress
fatal
missing
lullabies
heartache
shadows

hmm. not too hard i hope ^^
have fun and let me know when its up :)

A 3 would do quite nicely with me. Indeed, indeed. :D

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

a 3 it is!

subject: flower
setting: in a garden

words:

pretty
bloom
tall
thick
violet
daydreams

have fun ^^

Wow, just gonna comment on how you keep coming up with these challenge answers and they're so good and appropriate each time. I understand that's not an easy thing so, wow! Good work Alice!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

haha well thanks controverse ^^ its times like these when i think a dictionary becomes man's best friend... XD hahahaha!
thanks again ^^

Quick question: does this poem have to rhyme?

cause I dont normally write poems that rhyme, they just flow.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

nope ^^ it doesnt have to rhyme or have a certain structure. just stick to your subject and setting and don't drift away from it, and include your words ^^

I cant do it. I've tried to write it a billion times and it only comes out as a short story. Sorry I kindda wasted your time.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

aw don't say that :(
are you sure? i can give you a lower number. don't ever say you "can't" do something. booksie helps you grow as a writer ^^ and i can make it easier for you :)
don't be so quick to give up...
you're more than welcome to enter back into the challenge. and i strongly encourage that you do ^^

I want a 5.5 or 5 not to hard or easy!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

smack dab in the middle, eh? haha

subject: photo album
setting: in an empty room

words:

chronic
unaware
liberty
sand
acknowledge
longing

hmmmm. i think that could make an interesting poem.. have fun and let me know when its up ^^

Hey! Like the one above mine, is their any way I can write a short story? I have some ideas for one if u say yes... if not, i'll try writing a poem!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

haha, no sorry. this is a poetry challenge, you wouldn't be challenged if you could write a short story. that would be all too easy ;)
write a poem ^^ if you are struggling, pick a different number and i'll give easier words. but no short stories. just poetry :)

Mine's done! Quick, I know! LOL! But I hope it's good! It's called photo album of/for? the ages! Please go check it out!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

wonderful! i'll get right to it ^^

P.S can I have another one?

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

sure ^^ what number would you like?

I want an easier one, a three! Thanks!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

lol all right, thats perfectly fine ^^

subject: rain
setting: storm

words:

joy
leap
umbrella
puddles
crackle
raincoat

have fun!

Heyyy i'll get to ur poem as soon as i can I'm packed with 2 others ahahah soo I promise I'll have it done this w/e !!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

haha there is no rush ^^ don't worry! take your time!

Wow, this sounds so awesome! I never would have thought of something like this. Well done Alice! Ha HA ok I want to try, seeing as I'm just having a ton of fun with all these challenges. I pick a...7. I like metaphors:)

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

mmmk a 7 it is.

subject: heart-shaped stone
setting: in a bookshop

words:

flabbergasted
precious
Luna
wintry
polish
broken

get creative and have fun ^^ i think you can make a fantastic poem with this, so i'm looking forward to see what you come up with :)
let me know when its up!

Hey alice......i know i took a little time........but anyways i have written a poem for your challenge
titled--The teddy bear on the street[i know that's a little unoriginal] ^.~

i'd luv it if you could check it out!

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

haha, don't worry about how long it took you. there is no rush ^^
i'll go check it out :)

Sorry it took so long for this challenge.....take a look a poem "Toy Soldier"

Thanks

Posted: Jun 30, 2008

Author Comment:

no need to apologize ^^ theres absolutely positively no rush to get the poem up :)
i'll go check it out!

hiya Alice, i really loved the words and setting. This time I would do it in a separate post.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

subject: pink flower
setting: in a hospital room

words:

everlasting
Milky Way
croon
lovely
breath (note this is "breath" not "breathe". breath is the noun. breathe is the verb ^^)
chime

think creative :)
i know you can do it!!

I want an eight :D (Can you give me an example of a methaphor? Cause they're all kinda slipping from my mind...)

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

hmmm ok

subject: candlewick
setting: at the end of a rainbow

words:

arable
procrastinate
sardonic
appetency
photosynthesis
origin

a metaphor example? hmm. ok.

"there are mountains in life we climb; some tall and rocky, others less steep, making an easier journey"
-comparing the journies in life to that of mountains. some events in our life can be challenging and full of hardship, while other things aren't as hard, making life easier

thats just an example to hopefully get your creative gears going ^^ now come up with your own and let me know when its posted :)

good luck!

Hey, is this still open?
Can i have another one? but can u do something i can link to the girl in my other poem (teardrops if u forgotten)I don't care how hard.Thanks

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

whoosh ok
sorry it took me so long to reply to this. i read it at like 5 in the morning and i was like ahhhh sleeeeep hahahaha

subject: dagger
setting: outside (your choice for where outside)

words:

dove
pencil
tremble
demonic
lassitude
verbose

good luck :)

btw - did you give up on the super hard one with antidistablishmentarianism? haha



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