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Angst

By: MissGC
Poetry


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Submitted: Mar 18, 2008    Reads: 52    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


is it common?

am i rare?

its like im not there

there's something that doesnt fit

some one help me before i crumble

what the fuck do you care

i dont need help

i'm just fine

just fine covered in blood

just fine with our a soul

just fine with my heart ripped up

so i lied

dont patrinise me

because you do not know how this sits

you do not know how this is

i couldnt count the number of times you lied

i can be a singer

i can be a punk

i can be any thing i fucking want

there is one thing i cant be

i cant be fake

cuz that is you

so go be some one your not.

maybe it'll make me better


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Lol. "I'm a fake!, I'm a fake!, I'm a fake!" Sorry, had to be said.

Posted: Mar 18, 2008

Author Comment:

i prob wrote it while listening to that song lol

nice poem! i really liked it but i havent read a poem with well u know... those words in it! lolololol! hahahahahah sorry couldnt help it! :)

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

lol sorry i have never been one to sugar coat anything for no one. i really adore your comments. thank you



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