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The fifth piece in my 50 Words Project!

This started out as a motivationl text... for my own use.
But now I think it is time to share it with you Booksians who care to read my work...

As you can see, I have played with the structure of the lines in this one. Not sure if it really makes a difference at all... Please tell me your opinion!

Submitted:Sep 23, 2011    Reads: 30    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   

Whenever the night seems too dark

and no angel will descend from Heaven above

to release you from your burdens,

when waves of remorse

disturb the peace of your mind's shore

and the winds of regret

unsettle your strong will,

and there seems to be no way out,




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