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The Sad Story of Nel

Novel By: Shinjutsu Kage

The Story of a depreased individual who hates the world as it is. He soon falls in love with a girl, but she is suddenly taken from him. THen the constant fear of others around him propel him through this sad tale of what is the life of Nel, of nothing. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Nov 3, 2012    Reads: 3    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

So life moves on

I watch as the wretches carry on

Thinking of only themselves

And i sit in that classroom

Then she walks in

Her again

She sits next to me

And is quiet for a moment

Then she looks at me

Before turning back

As if i look revolting

Even though it is true

That i am a vile beast

Filling in the husk of my former

But looks at me again

She opens her mouth,

Trying to say something

The words not coming out to the surface

Instead they are trapped

As if forbidden

I do not mind

She looks funny to me

As she struggles to even utter a sound

To me

She cannot though

She finally looks forward

At the instructor

Ignoring me

But i got the message

She is forbidden to tell me anything

For they are watching

To see what i will do

For i am a terrorist upon the status quo

I am a rebel for freedom

Within this threshhold of conformity

Where voices are damaged

And all individuality is lost

To those who hold power over the weak

I promise to change things

And all the while

I watch this girl

The one who was like the forbidden fruit

To eve in the land of eden.


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