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The Sad Story of Nel

Novel By: Shinjutsu Kage

The Story of a depreased individual who hates the world as it is. He soon falls in love with a girl, but she is suddenly taken from him. THen the constant fear of others around him propel him through this sad tale of what is the life of Nel, of nothing. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Nov 14, 2012    Reads: 4    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

The class all left

But she stayed behind

Looking at me.

So i stayed out of curiosity

Of what she could say.

Her beauty surpasses all

And the smile of hers can

Brighten even the worst of days.

Then she got up

Her black hair whipping around

Like the whip of one with authority.

She crossed the room

A lioness on the prowl

After the pray she dare not look away from.

There she stood

Right in front of me.

She grabbed hold

But softened

Like that of ice in heat.

Her touch now was tender

Feeling what she has won

Even though the prize is useless,

She is content.

Looking up

Into my eyes

As if begging,


Her lips quiver

The arrow falling

But i hasten

And catch it

With my lips.

Her head jerks back

She looks with a scowl

Did i do wrong?

Or is she confused

WIth what she wants?

She grabs for the back of my head

Almost out of urgency.

Her lips move

Wanting to meet mine.

I oboluge

Her hand gently releases

Craddling my head.

This is a precious moment

One that i shall never forget.


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