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The Sad Story of Nel

Novel By: Shinjutsu Kage

The Story of a depreased individual who hates the world as it is. He soon falls in love with a girl, but she is suddenly taken from him. THen the constant fear of others around him propel him through this sad tale of what is the life of Nel, of nothing. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Nov 15, 2012    Reads: 1    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   

I carry her body

Into the center of the courtyard

For she deserves to be recognized

By all of these rats.

They need to see the harm they have done onto others

Not just me.

She deserved better

She deserved a life,

But it was to quick

THe candle didn't even have enough time to heat up my bones

Which freeze in bitterness

Bitterness created by this world.

THis world that is harsh and unresonably cruel

With only death waiting to end

This horrid existance.

She looks elagent

Dignified even

As she lies there

The blood running down her head

Painting the snow shite skin

With that of rose petals.

But now i must turn my back on her

And must take vengence

Into my bare hands

That shall soon be covered in blood

And to never be able to wash away.

I give chase

After her killer

He is close afterall.


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