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The Sad Story of Nel

Novel By: Shinjutsu Kage

The Story of a depreased individual who hates the world as it is. He soon falls in love with a girl, but she is suddenly taken from him. THen the constant fear of others around him propel him through this sad tale of what is the life of Nel, of nothing. View table of contents...


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Submitted:Oct 14, 2012    Reads: 1    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


I found her

She came to me again

This time in real life

I binked for a second

Not daring another

For i did not trust my eyes

In that moment

Could it be?

I was shocked

For i never believed that among the rats

Could be a thing of beauty

Like Her

She walked by me

In the hall

Onto her next class

For she fit the mold

How could she thou?

She is is perfect

Sculpted by Pygmalion

For she is not a rat to me

The only other among the sea of Wretchedness

She didn't see me

How could she?

For i am nothing

And can hide in even plain sight sometimes

So i keep walking

Hoping that one day

In the near future

She may notice and awaken

Even if it is a nightmare she wakens to

For i long for her

To only be at her side would be enough

For she may even full of wisdom

Maybe even share in my thoughts

But enough is enough

For he is there

And he is king among rats

So back i fall

Into my dark hole

For he hates me

And can see me everywhere

Haunting him forever

For i remind him

Of what he has done to me

All those years ago


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