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Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 Reads: 38 Comments: 4 Likes: 1
Gazing at the stars.
we are gazing at the stars, each one in turn.
Each little diamond of the sky important to the blalance of the universe
two stars can make it , but if one dies
the other one quickly follows
these two stars stay together forever, never leaving eachothers side
doesn't this remind you of what we use to have?
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Short, but sweet! Good Job!
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
Auow that is so cute...and sweet..untill the end..when reality hit..liked that!!!!
But why did you make it so short..want mooore!
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
hi! 0. u've stars in ur eyes. probably that why the poem turns out to be so romantic. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
That was a good poem, but i was expecting it to go on longer, but i like it the way it is.
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
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