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You Can't Wipe These Tears Away

Poem By: A Darker Heart
Poetry


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Submitted: Jan 31, 2008    Reads: 250    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


You can’t wipe these tears away,
I’ll just cry these tears away,
Oh I’ve tried to wipe these tears away,
But oh, the sorrow stays.

I’m like a bottomless well,
Some times life feels like hell,
And the tears start to flow,
Oh no, yes, no.

One of these days the tears have to stop,
If I keep crying I’ll dry up,
My heart will be desert,
My soul will be a desert.

My main problem, that I encounter time and time again,
Is the fact that no one will stop to listen,
They give their advice, like I can use it,
It doesn’t adhere to me, it just isn’t working.

You can’t wipe these tears away,
I’ll just cry these tears away,
Oh I’ve tried to wipe these tears away,
But oh, the sorrow stays.

Maybe one day I’ll find someone,
Who will lead me to the sun,
The sun  of warmth, of love, of everything good,
The sun of happiness, of kindness, of childhood.

That sun will fill me with a feeling of joy,
And banish all the shadows from my dried our heart,
Till then the tears still flow,
And I embrace the years that are to come. 

 

(Copyright (©) Ella Star. All rights reserved)


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Comments:

I like it. i cant find the words to explain what i think of it, except that it is good and you r really good.

Posted: Feb 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! i'm glad you read and commented on this. :-)

Why do your poems make me think of myself? That part about the useless advice is so common for me too. People throw so many things at me but it doesnt help at all. Im searching for that thing to bring sunshine back into my life as well. Beautiful, and 'hermoso' which is spanish for gorgeous. So dark and captivating. You did a really good job. Ill wipe those tears for you whenever you need me to. I understand when it is a battle that only one must face. So i will offer no advice, only the company of having someone there to hear you cry. Because i know thats all i want. Your poetry brings emotion out of me... hahah, i feel corny..... like bad corn...

;D Take care.

Posted: Feb 3, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so glad you like this!!!!! Enough to use Spanish on it!!! Wahooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
Thank you again Lionheart. I know you're there for me, and I'm here for you to.

Your poems bring a lot of emotion out of me as well.

*reads over comment*

God, I'm corny to.

*chokes on piece of corn*

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHK!!!

this poem makes me want to read more and more thats what makes me adore it plus the meaning of it. and i know ive shedded tears alot!

Posted: Feb 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!!!!!! I'm so glad you like this. :D

*hugs*

I think most will relate to this - we all cry. A good read :) ~ Nixie

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! :D



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