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Poem By: aahwaan
Poetry


This is a small poetry for my daughter on her birth. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 5, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Her shrill cry
broke the silence of the
Hospital room
running across all the beds
her voice made the
sweetest sound
in my ears

I had been waiting
for her to come along
for nine months
I was so restless,
now I am so free
so relaxed
her red face is not
so clear
I know she looks like me
but so what
she is part of me only

I love her a lot
I care for her,
adore her
and I wish she
lives long enough
that one day
she gives rest to my
motionless head
when I will be going out
of the universe
may she be there...


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Comments:

good one buddy,quite touching

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Welcome

Great wish

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah Indeed, she is my only daughter after all...

wow, this is so beautiful, it really touched my heart, such an amazing poem!

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You for the Kind words.



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