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Submitted: May 7, 2008    Reads: 27    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


A raindrop fell

upon a leaf

which dripped upon a sword in sheath

shining blue

with drops of dew

it trembled

quaked

and from it flew

a song of love

from me to you


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Short and sweet.

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you
"No day but today"

A very sweet poem!

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks
"No day but today"

Irwin
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Has merit. I like it.

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you
"No day but today"



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