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A place called "sublime"

Poetry By: air
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a place inside oneself.........my mother made me aware that 'sublime' is pronounce with a long 'I' instead of a short 'I' as I had thought 'duh' anyhow so I changed the second to last line to rhyme. instead of 'out on a limb' it is now: 'above space and time'


Submitted:Aug 26, 2007    Reads: 282    Comments: 16    Likes: 5   


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On a venture, on a whim

I traveled within

I went to a place that's called

"The Will"

I found there a thirst? unquenched

"Until"

I went to a place they call it the

"heart"

To find an opening I had to be

"smart"

I went back to the 'Will'

And Willed it to

"Be"

The 'Heart' opened up

And then I was

"Free"

I floated up high and into a

"song"

The 'song' was a place I knew I

"Belonged"

The 'song' carried me higher and

"Above space and�time"

To a place I now know of as being

"Sublime"





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