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Destined Shores

Poem By: air
Poetry


attempting to discribe recent energies View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 2, 2008    Reads: 82    Comments: 6    Likes: 7   


 

Back abiding time

were energies

circling by the sidelines

of misinterpreted truths,

waiting for an opening

to call their own;

for all was not surreal inside the mind,

and chaos was able to sift into

reality.

*

Once inside there was no intention

to overthrow serenity

but only to dance with it

in an effort to become.

*

Inability to comprehend the goings on

led to static thought processes

of rationalizations

and misguided

efforts to make sense.

*

So, grasping at patience

is all there is left to do

until the cooling off,

as silence approaches

the destined shores of

Awakening.

*

 


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Comments:

Wow! I love this piece, Katie. It has a beautiful flow to it. I wish I could write like this but it's just not my style which is very simple and straightforward. You have a deept sophistication and elegance to your writing that is lovely. This is my favorite line:

"Once inside there was no intention
to overthrow serenity
but only to dance with it
in an effort to become."

Beautiful write.....Jerry


Posted: Feb 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi Jerry, now lets see, first I need to calm down from the last comment (SMILE) well Thank YOU again, we do each have a certain style but you know what I like the best, is when we pick up something from someone else and mix styles, I think it is a very interesting enhancement. anyway this one kinda looks at the way I have issues with rationalizing my thought patterns (usually when I have not been doing daily meditation which actually my main MEDICATION LOL)!
Such kind sentiments you give Jerry~hope you are having a fabulous weekend....peace, light, love, love and more love...katie*

HI KATIE I REALLY LIKED THIS TOO, AND AGREE WITH JERRY A LITTLE, I LOVE THE WAY YOUR POEMS ALWAYS RHYME AND TAKE THE MIND TO FAR AWAY PLACES SOMETIMES.....LOVE AND PEACE YOUR FREIND JULIET

Posted: Feb 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Juliet, I am so glad to hear from you- I just checked to see if you posted the 'Wishing Land' and see that you have 'YIPPY' thank you for the comment, now I HAVE to go read wishing land..........have been waiting anxiously* (smile) LOL!

Chaos dancing with harmony.
Yes.

Posted: Feb 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya! :) not good, not bad, just is! :) Thanks devilrod...*

I really like this writing, the emotion and energy behind it! a wonderful read!

Posted: Feb 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou again Twisted Illusion (nice name) :)
will have to check yours out...take care for now...katie*

I love the "...misguided efforts to make sense."
Makes sense to me. That's me sorted then. Thanks, katie. Excellent treatment.
Take care,
craaig

Posted: Mar 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks craaig :) ya I think that at times I try to make sense where it is not nessesary you know? some things I need to just feel without rational thought processes. To much thinking LOL!!! have a good weekend************ (smiles)

for all was not surreal inside the mind,

How true...I feel that inside me so many times, Katie..

Gave it a "I like it"....

felt connected...

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou Pratibha :)
the lower mind is always in conflict, it is it's nature.
on this path to connect with the higher mind of awareness it is disrupted by the constant struggle within by our small ego. it's not always an easy thing especially being we are conencted to all consciousness. so we feel so many different things you know? Peace continues to be something to work at daily.
Peace to you Pratibha and love and light - katie



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