sadness rests over the river of hope

sadness rests over the river of hope

praying for the unconscious aspects

to be revealed

moon approaches, and the heart has yet

to gain the knowledge

to allow the release

selfish remnants holding on to the

righteousness

will not allow forgiveness

sadness lingers above,

calling for a release and withdrawal

so it can once again

return to the river of hope

and be carried up stream

by the light of the moon

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mum55

Hi Katie such a simple poem with such strong feelings really enjoyable read......Peace and happiness Julietx

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

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JULIET!!!!!!!!!!!! Your Back! ^SMILES^
it sure must have been some birthday party LOL!
well, we were all concered about you ya know?
I even thought about emailing Paul to see if he knew.
another day or two I probably would have.
So anyhow, life must be going good to booksie for such an extended time? I hope you are having a fun time. thankx for the wonderful comment :) peace and love, katie

devilrod

You are very wise.

Posted: Apr 25, 2008

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LOl! no not really! only a willingness to look deeper.
but it often takes me a few of days to disect a situation you know? for the learning part to come forefront.
Thankyou ^smiles^

Pratibha

Very very touchy and so very true.....
And so very honest feelings......

I love u for these feelings, buddy

Posted: Apr 26, 2008

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^smiles^ THANKYOU Pratibha :-D
I am very glad you liked this one.
I had a difficult learning experience a few days before this.
it's not always easy to see youself you know?
Have a nice night-peace and love~

Pratibha

i read thid again today when i needed this peace of mind and needed to soothe my tired nerves...thanks KATIE....ur poems revived me

Posted: May 21, 2008

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^_^ I am glad they can help you, that makes me feel good! ^_^
peace to your heart Pratibha, all is well, this too shall pass. love and hugs, katie

Ashleigh Butcher

I got shivers! I found it most fantastic. Strong, yet touching. I'm loving everything of yours thus far. Lovely work.

Posted: May 29, 2008

Author Comment:

(Smiling) ^_^
you are too sweet :D

Pratibha

selfish remnants holding on to the

righteousness

will not allow forgiveness

Loved this phrase and wish I could learn and change a bit....control my anger and forgive and forget.....

Posted: May 31, 2008

Author Comment:

oh yes you will! I think you are a little above pride and anger, I think you are more towards courage and neutrality.
though you are coming closer to the willingness to accept what ever is and then let go of the past.
everyone has a story; it is "The story of ME"
we are all connected and vulnerable to the compulsive mind patterns. We have just not yet realized that our thinking is not who we are. thoughts come to us and then we entertain them as if they are our own yet they are not. they are the 'collected conscious' hahaha, so you can then see your thinking will slow down when you allow it to be instead of feeding into it as if it was you. heheheeheheh I know I don't make much sense this is why I sugest the book "the power of now" it explains what i can not. I get caught in thought too ^_^

Classy Peach

I hope you're ok.
I also hope you awake on Monday morning feeling adored, because you are adored by many here on Booksie, me being one.

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

^_^ thanks, that means alot.
oh yes I am fine, I don't get depressed over it cause like I told him; I was dissapointed but deep down I somewhat expected it. he was so looking forward to it like he couldn't wait for three weeks and so he was bound to relapse. the burning desires were too much to handle LOL.
he's been dealing with trying to quit drugs and alcohol and its not been easy, I've been doing the biofeed back for him long distance but its not enough,,,,he's got health issues as well. we were in love as teenagers and I've been working the last months on healing the teenager that is still in me lol, wishing to experience him again and at the same time wondering if its right or not.
if you knew how long it has been for me you would litterally gasp LOL no kidding,, anyone who knew me before 2004 would fall on the floor in a faint LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!!!
so ya, I think like it would be like the first time again LOL
and with my first and oh so special love it could be awesome...ah, but there higher things in store I guess,,,,,
gee whiz can I not have one last fling before the spirit pulls me into a rhealm where I will not care about sex anymore LOLOLOLOLOL oh-no,,,,,,hmmmmmmmm, ok well guesss I better go,,,,thanks for listening, didn't want to go into partial detail on your page too much traffic LOL
email me anytime you feel like it K?
see you later have a great day ~katie

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