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SUBSEQUENTLY SPEAKING

Poem By: air
Poetry


Tags: pleasing, feeling

Too cold to go outside, not busy at work...so here I get to play at booksie... :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 18, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 3    Likes: 4   


 

Subsequently speaking

I stepped into the meaning

there it was that I

was somehow barely seeing.

 

though thought and sight

they were not right,

and the meaning

wasn't pleasing,

sure enough I took from it

a cosequential feeling.

 

Pleasing to my ears and eyes

I like the new-found feeling

but subsequent emotions

at times are not appealing.

 

Torrid days do find me now

and true, I must confess

I wasn't hiding from the cloud

it's rain I do protest.

 

So from here I sit and stare

heart wanders to and fro,

I can not help at times regress

inside a tiny shadow.


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Comments:

What a wonderful wordsmith you are.
Musings of the wondering/wandering mind.
I like.

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe (smile) it was fun as it came but ya know what? when it comes like that I often don't understand all the words completely LOL! had to look up subsequent and consequential to make sure they were used correctly LOL! now I feel stupid, but that's why I don't always understand other peoples; I don't even always understand my own. silly huh? but were going to get the jist of it anyway though.
Thanks sweetie* :)

The last two lines are really profound

Posted: Feb 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe 'inside a tiny shadow' Thankyou Poewhit...wishing you well...katie :)

"WONDER-FULL"!!! What a special piece, Katie. You should have more free time on your hands!!! We've had some really wonderful postings recently here on Booksie. Some great new talent and to compliment poems like yours!!! TTT... hehehe...........Jerry(^_^)

Posted: Feb 19, 2008

Author Comment:

HI JERRY ;-) GOOD MORNING TO YOU! yes it was nice to have some free time at the sme time it is SO burr chilly cold here you can not go outside (sob) LOL but you know it is nice to be snuggly at home with my kittys (smile) yes it's a good life. good to have new talent on here; a blending....take care now....peace and light...katie



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