Well, someone must be taking it
Cause surely it's not me
It just keeps disapearing
This 'TIME' we can not see.

I'd surely like to know just whom
This thief of time might be.
I just may want to buy from him
A piece of time for me.


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Submitted: May 10, 2007 Reads: 74 Comments: 6 Likes: 5
Well, someone must be taking it
Cause surely it's not me
It just keeps disapearing
This 'TIME' we can not see.

I'd surely like to know just whom
This thief of time might be.
I just may want to buy from him
A piece of time for me.

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My first stop your way .. And it won't be the last..lovely little poem and so true .
Floating around the globe is this unknown authors piece .thought it tied in with yours ..Same Humour!
A man once ask God .
'God what is time to you?'
God Replied,
A million of your years is but one second of mine!'
The man then asked God.
God,What is wealth/money to you?'
God replied,
'A million of your pounds is but one penny of mine!'
After a short pause the man asked God.
'God,can I have one of your pennies?'
God replied ,
'yes,in just one second!'
Success with you writtng.
Posted: May 20, 2007
EXCELENT**** You are a great poet Katie
Thank you
Posted: Oct 6, 2007
Your thoughts and words just flow. Wouldn't it be great if we could buy back time. NICE!!!
girlish
Posted: Oct 7, 2007
Very good Katie. Makes me think.
Edward Young (English poet, 1863-1765) said, "Procrastination is the thief of time...", but I think that now it is the internet we have to watch out for.
craaig
Posted: Oct 7, 2007
Love this!
Witty and concise.
Nice one Katie -I spelt your name right this time!
Rickey (hehe!)
Posted: Jan 19, 2008
excellent poem, really clever, and everything fits together perfectly! i like it!
*norah :D
Posted: Jan 22, 2008
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