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Touching on an inner glance

Poem By: air
Poetry


drawing into half fantasy and inner connections View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 13, 2008    Reads: 25    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


An incoming beauty

High-jacks the sky temporarily

supplementing thought identities

that trail off

faintly cascading down around us

to permeate the law of

gratitude*

~

some song; some dance;

and the softness interacts

touching on and inner glance

upon which smiles appear. 

~


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Irwin
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What a pleasent little poem.

Posted: Apr 13, 2008

Author Comment:

haha :-) Thankyou Irwin! I'm glad you liked it!
am never sure how my imagination will come off to others LOL!

Very serene.
Beautiful.

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankyou (SMILE) I hope you will share again sometime soon
- if not I can always read what's there :) I'm sure there's got to be at least a couple I've missed :-)

some song; some dance;

and the softness interacts

touching on and inner glance

upon which smiles appear


Wow.......

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

^SMILE^ Oh Thankyou Pratibha! ^SMILE^



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