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WRITING MY NAME

Poem By: air
Poetry


when we fall we gotta get up again :) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 11, 2007    Reads: 49    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Writing my name at the top of the world

Thinking I know who I am

Finding my way through the cracks and the curves

Finally I'm able to stand

Then all at once I'm slipping away

Wishing I'd held out my hand

Nobody know's to what the degree

The injuries are when you land

I only know I'll climb up again

Maybe this time I'll hold out my hand

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Very powerful and emotional...Very good

Posted: May 11, 2007

Author Comment:

thankyou again, my best to you--air

So true, no one knows what EXACTLY we go through that causes strife, but we pick up ourselves and move on, and if we need it, we will reach out for help....beautiful poem air

Posted: May 11, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks leesah, so many of us find it hard to ask for help, although we know how good it feels to help another.



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