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Center of the Universe

Poem By: Aislin Kane
Poetry


...if I was the center of the universe View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 1, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


It seems often

I am the center of the universe,

but I know this isn’t so,

for even if I was

the axis point on which we wobble,

however crucial I would be,

the world would keep its own motion

and I, powerless

would remain in that still place,

center of the universe,

yet not the universe itself


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Comments:

Another brilliant piece. Could be taken as a metaphor for a great many things. I liked it. keep writing.

Posted: Feb 2, 2008

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Thanks so much for the comment and the fan requset!



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