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The Heat

Poem By: Aislin Kane
Poetry


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Submitted: Apr 8, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Oh, the early morning,
shining bright through the window,
heating steadily the streaked glass,
roasting, quite crispy, a twitching fly
upon the sill.
Lazy loops through the air,
heat permeating, evaporating slowly,
the will to accomplish
all tasks once thought necessary,
scorched, a burning flame
of procrastination.


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Comments:

ha, oh how i have felt this before.
i love your work. =]

Posted: Apr 26, 2008

Author Comment:

...don't we all...lol. Thanks for the comment.

Yeah, heat like that just zaps a person of all their ambition. Nice job.

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

I love your poems!!

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

lol...Thank you!

Oh my gosh - I even procrastinate in the winter when it is cozier curled up by the fire. A brilliant little poem, it is almost snowing here and summer memories far away but this brings them back.

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Good summer memories I hope. :)



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