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Submitted: Apr 16, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Ones tries,
in most things
to be sophisticated
and scholarly,
to deliver the insight,
the discerning perspective.
One fails where others succeed,
and yet those who succeed
fail where others triumph,
and this generation:
diagnosed with indifference,
the symptoms of growing apathy,
appear to have forfeit where victory was once chased.
But the pursuit outweighs the payoff,
and there is always knowledge where
ignorance and mystery are thought to roam,
always insight to crush the arrogance
of metaphorical wisdom
to humble the most highly regarded


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Comments:

holy hell!
this poem is wonderful, kinda just rolls off the toungue.

Posted: Apr 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

awesome poem...I can totally relate to it and keep writing! :)-zia

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

favorite line: and this generation:
diagnosed with indifference,
the symptoms of growing apathy,
appear to have forfeit where victory was once chased.

you're truly gifted =)

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! XD

I'd have to agree .
Especially with this line :

and this generation:
diagnosed with indifference,
the symptoms of growing apathy,
appear to have forfeit where victory was once chased.

Sigh... the growing apathy of this generation :( saddens me so.

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

The voice over was great.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.



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