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Submitted: Feb 1, 2008 Reads: 148 Comments: 5 Likes: 3
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Bloody brilliant piece, well written. A bit self contradictive at points, it seems, but the general idea remains apperent. I liked this piece a lot. Keep writing.
Posted: Feb 2, 2008
The way forward for humanity is the knowledge that there is no God, we must be our own God and create better lives for ourselves instead of going to churches and having all these holy wars.
Posted: Feb 9, 2008
I love the way your words just flow so beautifully together. And the point you make is fantastic!
Posted: Mar 23, 2008
:) I loved it. This is my kind of poetry. I like poetry that not only has feeling, but means something and makes the reader think.
Your words captivated me and have inspired me as well. The language you used is brilliant!
If I must say so, this is probably one of the most promising pieces I have read on Booksie so far. Well done. If only more people could communicate more through their writing in 155 words or less, just like you have. :)
( And yes, I did count how many words you used...about 155)
Posted: May 27, 2008
Ha! I love it. Your word choice evokes very vivid images, and I couldn't agree more with the message. I also like the way you conveyed your opinion strongly, but without slapping the reader in the face with it. Take Care.
Posted: Nov 30, 2008
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