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The beauty of the night comes to life. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 7, 2008 Reads: 52 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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Beautiful, very well done. I`m giving all your stuff an `i liked it`haha.
Steph:)
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
I closed my eyes after reading this to take a deep breath. It was beautifully written with a rhythm that added to the surreal scene.
The first line blew my mind away! It was really something else and it made me see the night differently :) There were a few lines here and there that i really liked. You chose them well. The imagery was very lively and very clear under the moonlight.
Wow, it was a great read, i dont know what else to say hahahaha. The night life is a beautiful thing. It's as beautiful as the sunshine of the day, only a different shade ;)
Very nice Alice.
Posted: Apr 9, 2008
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