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Treacherous Lullaby

Poem By: allisonlovely
Poetry


Sing me to sleep, oh treacherous lullaby View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 27, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Treacherous lullaby,

Sing me to sleep,

Sing to me until the tears run down my cheeks

Hold me tight as the blood flows down my face,

My house in ashes, my life a disgrace

Cuts and bruises all over me

Stop singing, I just want to be

But the lullaby nevers stops,

It's always there

I hide behind it,

I am scared

So treacherous lullaby,

Sing me to sleep,

Sing to me until the tears stop running down my cheeks

Hold me until the blood stops flowing down my face,

My house not in ashes, my life in full grace

Cuts and bruises are not there

I will not hide,

I am not scared

So treacherous lullaby,

Kiss me goodnight

I have fought this battle,

I am done with this fight


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Comments:

Woah, I really liked this poem, its so powerful. The way you showed that no matter what happens that lullaby is there, comforting, through thick and thin if you will. Great poem =]
xx

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

awhh thank you! hah that's the message :] that means a lot to me

Very cool, i especially liked the ending "I have fought this battle, I am done with this fight." Very nice

Posted: Sep 2, 2008

Author Comment:

oh! thank you so so much



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