Did You Ever Really Love Me?
by:AllyDee
As you walked away from me,
I felt tears forming in my eyes,
I had never felt like that,
As if my heart was breaking.
heartbroken
I thought you loved me
Didn't you?
Was it just an act?
Or was it true?
Publish. Read. Get Read.
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This poem is my 3rd new one for the day :]
Its about a breakup...
and the girl is heartbroken.
She thought the boy loved her.
She hopes he actually did instead of lying about loving her.
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Submitted: Jul 23, 2008 Reads: 67 Comments: 7 Likes: 6
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Comments:
WOW this is like how i questioned myself with a previous relationship so i can totally relate, i think this one is my fav because i can relate to it so easily
xoxo
DOM!!!
XD
Posted: Jul 23, 2008
AW.... so sad. I liked it though. I always feel this way. sooooo. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahyahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahshahahahahahahahahahahahahahshahahahahahahahaha@!!!111111!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Jul 24, 2008
God, I can totally relate. Loooove it. ^-^
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
hi! ally. when a girl is taken for a ride in love, it feels bad. this jerk should be taken to task. sad, sad. hope she comes out of it in one piece. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
Hey Ally :) I love these short poems, they are so complex and well written. You sure are becoming a great, honest, and poetic author. Don't stop! Regan
Posted: Jul 26, 2008
I liked it, mostly cuz I can definately relate, this is great:P
Steph(:
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
I totally know what ya mean!! Very good job I love it!!
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
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