The Blue that Play
Your eyes,
The cool blue color of the Carribean,
They let me read you,
Like an open book
But sometimes,
They play me,
Just like a computer game.
Publish. Read. Get Read.
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For kitkat123's challenge
cool
book
computer
game
my topic
the colour blue
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Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 Reads: 44 Comments: 5 Likes: 1
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stephhlebreton
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sorry,,,too lazy to sign onto my account:P lol, but this is really creative. I loved it ally:D
STeph(:
Posted: Aug 21, 2008
that was something different and new i ♥♥ it!
Posted: Aug 21, 2008
this is real good! you used your words well!!!
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
Great job! I knew I couldn't make a poem using those words. I hope you enjoyed doing this challenge. You're always welcome to do more then one color. Awsome!
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
Short, sweet and powerful!
Love it!
Posted: Dec 3, 2008
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