The Highway. Go.

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Poem By: AllyDee
Poetry

Tags: hurt, pain, go, away, highway

take the highway...Just go away View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 3, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 5 Likes: 2

The highway

Take the highway

Go away

Don't stay here

You're hurting me

Can't you see

Now go

Take the highway

And drive away

Far away

Go.

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Comments:

ReganFinch

Hey Ally :) This is simple and sweet. You have such a huge talent of explaining yourself perfectly in just a few words, and that is definitely talent. Great as always! Take care, Regan

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!
:)

dubl

I've been in situations wher i've wanted to tell someone this. It's very good. Keep it up :]

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah.. me too.
and thanks
:]

stephhlebreton

mmm, I love it. Really inspiring, and so meaningful..you have such a talent ally;P
Steph(:

Posted: Aug 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks
:)

SomeoneCrazy

Awesomeness...Spectacular Job!!

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

xxxrocknroll

I've always felt like getting on a bus or train, and leaving without a trace. It would be..one of the best feelings in the world, I think. Nice, simple poem. ;]

Posted: Oct 13, 2008