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Nuith across the city

Poem By: Alquimista
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Submitted: Apr 22, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Crashing waves on your face
Or was it just a reflection on the street?
Your style devoured
Hurled back by means of snake-charm wonder.
Your starry symmetry
Eating its own tail,
As we measured each other with the yardstick of our love.

Listen
To her eternal
Song
All together
Now


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Comments:

and she commands the whole universe to conspire making it happen. oh what a goddess.

Wow, you're good. Really good. Even great. Nope.....Very great.

I could read your writing for hours.

Posted: Apr 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Isn't Booksie so wonderful? It allows us to contact a wide variety of styles that resonate with our own spirits. Thanks so much for the encouragement and the compliments. =)

hi! alquimista. when u mention yardstick, u've already measured love. snakes wouldn't 've heard a more charming melody. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thx Bubbly. Just a little play on words. =)



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