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about the tragedy of two sisters View table of contents...
Submitted: Feb 29, 2008 Reads: 48 Comments: 1 Likes: 1
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Wow this is very enigmatic^_^. I liked it, especially the lines, "They were men, no, beasts of dark
The clock went dumb, the wolves, the lark
That knock I heard our door did bear
Those leaves I heard a beast did tear." I could clearly see leaves twirling around outside, and then some beast coming and tearing them apart with it's claws and mouth:). I loved the images this poem conjured. It is dark and leaves room for pondering^_^.
Awesome ryhmes,
and lot's of chocolate to you,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
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